I had to actually write the whole thing and start fresh as the paragraph I have written previously was identified as completely different thing. The discussion was about body paragraph but the paragraph I had presented can be considered as a conclusion according to the professor. So I tried to construct a body paragraph with quotations again. Since I have not received any feedback on my uses of quotations, I used them as the same way I have used them in the previous discussion. Revisions are very important as we are getting valuable feedbacks on our writing.